12.06.2014

Photo story: Runaway

Hi! So today I'm going to be telling you about an idea for a photostory. Hope you like it!

This takes place in ten nations along the coast of Veranda.

Rulers, also known as the Goverment, control everything the citizens of Veranda do. They force the people to do certain things.

A girl named Piper lives in Veranda with her mother, Pandoria, who is one of the top Goverment leaders in Veranda. Piper thinks the Government is cruel and unfair, but her mother gets more and more involved in it. Until Pandoria is distant and far from her daughter. She practically lives in the Goverment headquarters. New rules are posted, by Piper's mother, and Piper realizes that she is breaking some of them. Most if all of them. She knows her mother, now top Goverment official, will not let her out of the punishment. Finally Piper decides to run away , through the woods. Piper's never been in the woods before, and she's never planned to as the punishment for going beyond the fence is many whippings, which could kill a twelve year old like herself. But it's the only way. Piper knows that her mother Pandoria will try to come after her. But she's willing to risk it.
     So, Piper saddles up her horse, grabs a few things. She'll need them. Piper hopes to maybe live in the woods, where she'll be free. Maybe.


Whadya think of it? I'm not really sure if it'll be like this, I might make some edits. Maybe Rebecca will play Piper? We'll see. Sounds like the Hunger Games? It's kind of based on that. Yep.

Let me know what you think in the comments below. Thanks!

Bye for now!



Jana


5 comments:

  1. The fence bit sounds very much like the hunger games, which I finally got around to reading. Yay!
    Your story sounds awesome!
    Gwynnefar

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    1. Yeah, it does! Really? Do you like them? Maybe we could be Hunger Games buddies! XD
      Glad you like it!

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  2. Oooh! It sounds so good! I really like it! I've never read the hunger games! :)

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    1. Great! I'm really happy you guys like it so far! I'm writing the story in my notebook now, and I have to admit it sounds great to me! ;)

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    2. They are REALLY good! You should!

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